Vean y disfruten lo qué los otros participantes hacen, en el blog de Renilde.
The subject of the Drawing Challenge this week was proposed by Renilde. the word chosen is Lighthouse. I show my idea.
See and enjoy what other participants do, on Renilde's Blog.
En la profunda oscuridad del océano
mi bote de pape va
navegando a la deriva
Destello,
Destellooo
Destello...
¡Apagá la luz de tu faro por favor!
Yo prefiero ahogarme en las tinieblas,
perder mi ruta,
ser tragado por la inmensidad...
Vos sabés que hay otros botes por ahí…
... y no es que yo sea celoso,
pero mi bote, y los destellos de tu faro
no quieren
compartir con otro este océano.
In the deep
darkness of the ocean
my paper
boat goes adrift
Flash
Flashhh
Flash...
Turn off
the light of your lighthouse, please!
I'd rather
drown in darkness,
losing my
route,
being
swallowed by the immensity...
You know
that there are other boats out there ...
... and,
not that I'm jealous,
but my
boat, and your lighthouse flashes
do not want to
share with another this ocean.
20 comentarios:
Why are so desperate your words? Why is so sad this drawing? The lighthouse does not have the right to stop lighting in the dark. There're always souls that need to be rescued...
I like very, very much your illustration, Roberto!! It reminded me of Tove Jansson's "Moomin Pappa and the sea" (one of my favourites). I checked out in Interenet and found that the books about the Moomins are translated in Spanish... -
http://www.amazon.co.uk/Childrens-Tove-Jansson-Books/s?ie=UTF8&page=1&rh=n%3A69%2Cp_lbr_books_authors_browse-bin%3ATove%20Jansson%2Cp_n_feature_browse-bin%3A400537011
You'll enjoy reading them, I'm sure!!!:)
esta illustración está muy bonita! :)
Roberto,i look at your piece of work and and i'm taken to your wonderful world of imagination,
the blue wideness, wow! no lighthouse in sight but there are its flashes and than the paper boat, it all fits in so very fine, you are a master of transforming real feelings into something so pleasing to the eye and soul, thanks for taking part my friend, xx
This one has strong atmosphere. And lighthouse is clearly there even though you cannot see it.
Oh, and happy valentines, bit late too, sorryyy.... XXX :-)
Love it, as always;-) The sadness is your words wich are so romantic at the same time. The boat who wants the lights for itself....and I love the different shades of the blue! Have a nice weekend my blog friend!
ooooh, love the blue, love the newsprint boat, nice... :D
Oatoatoat
is out in a boat
on the big blue sea
with a bit of jealousy
in his poetry
but the lighthouse-light
is for all to see
is for all to ssave
so let the bard be brave
and everything will be allright!
I am struck by the beauty and calmness of this. I can see how the light would feel like an imposition. Perhaps it is best to travel by moonlight and starlight and the currents of the water. Without light (ego) one would have to succumb to faith (soul.) *smiles* Norma, x
ah the light house flashes and you in the boat tipping in the ocean. Wonderful interpretation of the theme.
I really like this we have all felt that tipping in the light of others.
Great job
Helen :)
interesante ver las diferencias de un mismo tema
Dear Roberto,
wonderful, intense drawing! I like it very much that you show the light (like searchlight) but not the source.
And, I am happy about Norma's words with the ego and soul... that nailed in my opinion most your sad, romantic words and drawing.
x Ariane.
Dear bard, I know it's not really you in that boat. I do the same thing. I can put on an emotion or a situation as if it is my own. Artists are so emphatic and full of fantasy! I know how it works for me, but keep forgetting it with other people. I allways want to read behind the lines, even if I know it doesn't make sense. So, jealous :)) sailor, bon voyage!
beautiful blue to fit the blue mood of the words you have penned, roberto. i like it very much. -sus
Dear Roberto,
what a wonderful drawing. I love the power of blue sea - perfect to meet the red of a lighthouse. Perhaps it is a smuggler boat?
Sabine
lost? at sea?
no lights in sight?
wait a minute!
that lifeboat is illuminating!
n♥
Muestras la otra cara de la moneda. Como siempre creativo y diferente...
I think this is a very beautiful and mournful love song.I can here the night time and the deep dark ocean. It is a very powerful illustrated story. This one I will remember in my mind and keep thinking about it for a long time!!
to me this is beautiful and very romantic,
little man in a boat outside in the big nature
by reading your words -
they are touching me a lot, it is beautiful!!! one of my favorites ever!
x Stefanie
Don't get drowned! Even if the blue of the sea is so beautiful that I'd love to bathe in it, too. Also love the light of the lighthouse moving over the water. It's strange, the story your painting is telling is full of loneliness, but I don't feel any fear when looking at it...it's the colours, I think...
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